Re: SOR Sprite Edits, Fake Screens, & Original Work

JoyJoyfulRabbit Mon Nov 16, 2015 7:29 pm

slooowly making in progess >_>

Its Ruffian Games' SOR4 stage

SOR Sprite Edits, Fake Screens, & Original Work - Page 6 SOR4-Ruffian_zpsjnqdvnhv

https://2img.net/h/i50.photobucket.com/albums/f344/Joy-Joyful/SOR4-Ruffian_zpsjnqdvnhv.png

Mr.Din Wed Dec 02, 2015 3:04 am

I think my genesis may have overheated... Sad

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**Don Vecta** Wed Dec 02, 2015 10:42 am

JoyJoyfulRabbit wrote:slooowly making in progess >_>

Its Ruffian Games' SOR4 stage

https://2img.net/h/i50.photobucket.com/albums/f344/Joy-Joyful/SOR4-Ruffian_zpsjnqdvnhv.png

Okay, some advice:

Work in layers. Obviously the inside the Pine Pot is an interior. Keep it with transparency. Same goes inside the cafe. Put them signs in another layer.
The custom sprite work needs gradient tones to give them depth and don't look like painted squares. Get rid of the black drawing lines so they can look consistent with the BKM style. Use the spriting style gradient from the original sources, too.
Get rid of those arcade machines. They're ugly, oversized for the enemy scale and won't fit. Besides, You may need to separate the interior in another layer anyways.
Put some frames on the cafe windows, too.
Put a SORR standard character layer in your work place so you can measure the proportions of your stage: the far left custom door looks gigantic in proportion of the BKM door.
If you can, change the palette colors of the structures so doesn't look like an obvious BKM Fighting Street rip off. This will give your stage identity.

Good job, getting there and it's starting to have shape. Smile

SoRFanatic Thu Dec 03, 2015 5:19 am

Mr.Din wrote:I think my genesis may have overheated...

What?! How did you wind up over there?!

**Don Vecta** Thu Dec 03, 2015 6:40 am

Mr.Din Fri Dec 04, 2015 10:59 am

JoyJoyfulRabbit Tue Dec 08, 2015 6:10 pm

Its SOR1 Dock stage. too lazy to resize the background... >_> suppose to be a bit small

SOR Sprite Edits, Fake Screens, & Original Work - Page 6 Dockstage_zpsuuusbsle

SOR Sprite Edits, Fake Screens, & Original Work - Page 6 Dockstage_zpsuuusbsle

Mr.Din Tue Dec 08, 2015 7:44 pm

JoyJoyfulRabbit wrote:Its SOR1 Dock stage. too lazy to resize the background... >_> suppose to be a bit small

I like it! The ground looks little off though, not sure how to put it but the front of the stage seems offset from the other half of the ground.

JoyJoyfulRabbit Tue Dec 08, 2015 8:18 pm

Mr.Din wrote:
JoyJoyfulRabbit wrote:Its SOR1 Dock stage. too lazy to resize the background... >_> suppose to be a bit small

I like it! The ground looks little off though, not sure how to put it but the front of the stage seems offset from the other half of the ground.

Hard to see ground :I

SOR Sprite Edits, Fake Screens, & Original Work - Page 6 SOR

Mr.Din Tue Dec 08, 2015 10:30 pm

JoyJoyfulRabbit wrote:
Mr.Din wrote:
JoyJoyfulRabbit wrote:Its SOR1 Dock stage. too lazy to resize the background... >_> suppose to be a bit small

I like it! The ground looks little off though, not sure how to put it but the front of the stage seems offset from the other half of the ground.

Hard to see ground :I

That has nothing to do with what I said, I'm talking about the perspective of the stage, it looks flat, might be that center piece and how it's shaded.

Guest Tue Dec 08, 2015 10:49 pm

The middle part is shaded the wrong way around compared to the rest of the floor.
That's what it is.

**Don Vecta** Wed Dec 09, 2015 6:16 am

I do like the tiling of the floor, though. The background area looks bit strange and can't figure out what is exactly.

Basically, the first layer of the scroller is great, just fix the shading so doesn't look out of place.

JoyJoyfulRabbit Wed Dec 09, 2015 6:47 pm

Like this shading at the middle?

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This is for SORmaker

Guest Wed Dec 09, 2015 6:50 pm

Still the wrong way around.
Looks like a deep gutter running along the middle because the light-dark is bottom-top compared to everything else, which is top-bottom.

JoyJoyfulRabbit Wed Dec 09, 2015 6:55 pm

CajNatalie wrote:Still the wrong way around.
Looks like a deep gutter running along the middle because the light-dark is bottom-top compared to everything else, which is top-bottom.

Oh :U oops

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*Flip*

Guest Wed Dec 09, 2015 6:56 pm

U: Much better

Mr.Din Wed Dec 09, 2015 8:52 pm

JoyJoyfulRabbit wrote:
CajNatalie wrote:Still the wrong way around.
Looks like a deep gutter running along the middle because the light-dark is bottom-top compared to everything else, which is top-bottom.

Oh :U oops

*Flip*

Much better indeed! I'd also suggest making it thinner like you did in the 2nd concept here and it'll be perfect! Smile

Criss Mon Jan 11, 2016 7:21 am

I'd still kill for good CLEAN pics of the two missing SOR1 stages.

Mr.Din Mon Jan 11, 2016 8:20 am

Criss wrote:I'd still kill for good CLEAN pics of the two missing SOR1 stages.

I'm right there with ya.

Mr.Din Sun Feb 28, 2016 9:00 am

SOR Sprite Edits, Fake Screens, & Original Work - Page 6 Idle_by_dintheabary-d9te9ww

SOR Sprite Edits, Fake Screens, & Original Work - Page 6 Burn_by_dintheabary-d9okxy5

putting my own spin on these concepts.

SoRFanatic Mon Feb 29, 2016 1:29 am

Do they have names?

Mr.Din Mon Feb 29, 2016 1:21 pm

SoRFanatic wrote:Do they have names?

Ivan "the stampede" Petrov and Brad "Burn" Stone

SoRFanatic Mon Feb 29, 2016 3:16 pm

Nevertheless, that's quite the spin on a concept.

JoyJoyfulRabbit Mon Feb 29, 2016 8:08 pm

Mr.Din wrote:
SoRFanatic wrote:Do they have names?
Ivan "the stampede" Petrov and Brad "Burn" Stone

That will be called Ivan Jr Petrov :U

Mr.Din Mon Feb 29, 2016 9:28 pm

JoyJoyfulRabbit wrote:
Mr.Din wrote:
SoRFanatic wrote:Do they have names ?
Ivan "the stampede" Petrov and Brad "Burn" Stone

That will be called Ivan Jr Petrov :U

Who would Ivan Petrov Sr be? Razz

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