Shirtless BK3 Axle Type 1

Hi all I'm working on a new look for BK3 Axle for SORR atm. Just wondering if any of you could give me some feedback on how he should look or what I could add. This is the work so far:

Axle Stone 1991 wrote:Hi all I'm working on a new look for BK3 Axle for SORR atm. Just wondering if any of you could give me some feedback on how he should look or what I could add. This is the work so far:

I see that there is inconsistency in the shading, it is necessary to understand the function of the tonalities and what each tone represents. In addition we have a conceptual problem... any change needs a purpose, cause or meaning. Right now we don't have much information... it's just axel shirtless. My advice is to look for references... whether technically or conceptually, get to know Axel's personality and the universe in which he exists, how you can work with it. Don't be afraid to try and don't be intimidated by mistakes.

Add more muscle. Axel must be shredded!

Teramussa wrote:

Axle Stone 1991 wrote:Hi all I'm working on a new look for BK3 Axle for SORR atm. Just wondering if any of you could give me some feedback on how he should look or what I could add. This is the work so far:

I see that there is inconsistency in the shading, it is necessary to understand the function of the tonalities and what each tone represents.  In addition we have a conceptual problem... any change needs a purpose, cause or meaning.  Right now we don't have much information... it's just axel shirtless.  My advice is to look for references... whether technically or conceptually, get to know Axel's personality and the universe in which he exists, how you can work with it.  Don't be afraid to try and don't be intimidated by mistakes.

Thankyou for your feedback, I was trying to refer to sor4s axle stone but shirtless as in sor4 he looks like he has put on some weight after the defeat of Robo Y in SOR 3, as that was Meany years ago and was trying for a shirtless form as a concept, I just wanted to see a difference in axles body look. you are right about the tone on his torso and the was he should look but I was only experimenting to see if this idea would work or not, but this is something ill look into continuing in the future.

Axle Stone 1991 wrote:

Teramussa wrote:

Axle Stone 1991 wrote:Hi all I'm working on a new look for BK3 Axle for SORR atm. Just wondering if any of you could give me some feedback on how he should look or what I could add. This is the work so far:

I see that there is inconsistency in the shading, it is necessary to understand the function of the tonalities and what each tone represents.  In addition we have a conceptual problem... any change needs a purpose, cause or meaning.  Right now we don't have much information... it's just axel shirtless.  My advice is to look for references... whether technically or conceptually, get to know Axel's personality and the universe in which he exists, how you can work with it.  Don't be afraid to try and don't be intimidated by mistakes.

Thankyou for your feedback, I was trying to refer to sor4s axle stone but shirtless as in sor4 he looks like he has put on some weight after the defeat of Robo Y in SOR 3, as that was Meany years ago and was trying for a shirtless form as a concept, I just wanted to see a difference in axles body look. you are right about the tone on his torso and the was he should look but I was only experimenting to see if this idea would work or not, but this is something ill look into continuing in the future.

Great idea. He looks very interesting. In fact, I like this option and I would like to see more pumped up muscles. Especially the chest should be more prominent.

This requires a six pack and more toned chest muscles(dry muscles)!